Back grounds. Lovely sounds... Happy faces...flying rice... It is nice...all is nice... A thousand roses stand in lines... In my hand. A holding hand... Feeling numb but...i will stand... Say the word. Grin and grin... But for god…why feel like sin? Braid all light into my heart... Now I'm starting from the start... Now I'm leaving another part... Never meant to say her name... Never meant to fit her frame... Never meant to burn her flame... Never meant for her to claim... My heart. Will never be the same!! Now I'm riding the dreamy cart...
I should see the other one..
Life with her should..begun!!
Breaking fences as we run
Oh..i know that she's the one..
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Wednesday, August 16, 2006
On August, 16, 2006 3:56 PM , Jerusalem
from Jordan
said:
from Jordan
said:hi,
nice poem caller,
I like the final part specially when you say:
Never meant to burn her flame
and
My heart will never be the same
On August, 16, 2006 4:21 PM , thecaller
from Egypt
said:
from Egypt
said:Asalam 3alaykom,
Ada..great to see you..
thank you so much for your words..
yes..i am a woman ..but this is a guy poem..that's what i think he would feel if he has to marry someone else rather than his true love..
I'm waiting for a nice poem written by ada:):)
On August, 16, 2006 4:23 PM , thecaller
from Egypt
said:
from Egypt
said:Asalam 3alaykom,
jerusalem..hi..thank you so much for visiting..
thank u so much for liking the peom..yes..i guess the final part summs up the whole feeling..
come again..you're always welcomed:)
On August, 16, 2006 9:55 PM , eno
from Sweden
said:
from Sweden
said:wmesh 3agbek 3emad 3bd el7aleem.. 2oleely fi eh ykhalliny asm3 7aga tanya ya rika..
great sad poem as usual 7abebty..
big hug
On August, 16, 2006 11:50 PM , Artemis
said:
Gr8 poem dear ..
really .. wonderful words ..
thnx ..
SALam ..
On August, 17, 2006 12:01 AM , Fadi K
said:
Hi Caller , so nice a poem , you reminded me of "C'est Fini" of Charles Aznavour! (man3an lelabse: Would've put a link but I couldn't find it online!)
On August, 17, 2006 1:25 AM , Karin
from Germany
said:
from Germany
said:Beautiful dear .. really beautiful!
YOU did compose that?? IF - you're REALLY something else ... WOW!!
Best regards to mom .. and big hug!
On August, 17, 2006 2:38 AM , توتي فروتي
from Saudi Arabia
said:
from Saudi Arabia
said:that`s really wonderful
I loved it sister :)
and by the way
I loved the NASHED that you put it
the man has a marvelous voice
take care
On August, 17, 2006 4:24 AM , thecaller
from Egypt
said:
from Egypt
said:Asalam 3alaykom,
Eno..haha..3ala ra2yek..
+ Artemis..thank u so much:):)
+ thank u fadi..
+ thank you dear karin..yes i did..hugs back :):)
On August, 17, 2006 4:27 AM , thecaller
from Egypt
said:
from Egypt
said:Asalam 3alaykom,
Hamede..thank you..
+ tutti...thank u dear for ur nice words..yes..i liked this nasheed..:)
On August, 17, 2006 7:54 AM , Summer
from United States
said:
from United States
said:Thank you so much for adding my blog to your list of blogs. so sweet of you!
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from United Arab Emirates
you are very deep. i like your poems very much. you challenge my mind all the time. if i could make a poem that rhymes, i'll try to post a poem, in time.
if you were just a guy, your last stanza would mean something else. i don't know, it's only my interpretation. anyways, keep up the good work.